creating a character

In Drama I was asked to create a character and give her a voice so I wrote a Monologue. In My case I wrote about a girl who transformed into a Peacock.  This is me delivering the monologue.

Here is my monologue:

It pass a week since I transform in the monster I am, I now know why I transform in this because the pólice is looking for me and in this times the pólice are robots so I have the head of a robot, I don´t like this transformation because of it I have to steal to eat and my friends don´t want to be with me.I was a good boy but this transformation change my life, adding to the change that happen, when I was five years old my parents have to go to prison for all their life, I have to go with my aunt she thing that I was slave but I am not his slave, so when I transform in this monster I escape from the house to this abandoned house, I had make a big error because now I don´t have money, but now that I think this life is better but I´m very hungry Iwill go to steal and said sorry to the People that Iam going to steal.

Here is my perform: