we were asked to write a short story with some things given by the teacher:
prompt sentence: "Mark couldn´t believe his good luck."
use:
A)Five connectors
B)Three sequence markers (first, then, ...)
C)Two examples of direct speech
Mark couldn´t believe his good luck of this year because Mark now is a goal-keeper and his team isn´t very good however he is a excellent goal-keeper, additionally we can say that he catch 6 penalties that is amazing for a player of this level above all comparing him with the last year he is making a fantastic tournament.
we are here in the first match of Mark Antone profesionally, he is debuting in Brown De Adrogue. The match finish with a won over Temperley for 3-1, but the coach is going to tell something to Mark:
"Mark I want to tell you something you are the best goal-keeper I ever know, first you catch a penaltie, second you catch a ball that was going to the angle, and third you are fantastic."
"Thanks coach." Mark answer
When he finish he went to the car with his mother and he say to his mom:
"All the things in the world I made were thanks you, you are my person to follow" Mark say crying
Subsequently his mom started to cry.
Showing posts with label language. Show all posts
Showing posts with label language. Show all posts
Friday, October 30, 2015
Friday, October 23, 2015
Dear editor
Andrea, the best language teacher, asked us to write a formal letter. For this assigment, she gave us some instructions:
- Start the letter "Dear editor"
- Follow the plan on page 93
- Use "Useful expressions"
- Introducty comments: 1
- Agreeing: 3
- Explaning your views: 2
- Claryfing: 2
- 150 words
Dear editor,
I read your article about the crimes, I fully agree with advising people to protect their homes ans posessions, that is to say, prevent crime.
I am in agreement with the idea of instalating cameras on the streets, because of this, the police will be able to catch a lot of thieves and burglaries. Also, they can respond to crime quickly if not therefore sometimes they arrive when thieves have already left. Police can also patrol the streets, in other words, make thieves go out of the streets.
The role of citizens is to install alarms or sensors in the neighbourhood houses, so if something happen in one house, neighbours will know and advice police that is to organzie in groups of neighbours. I fully support avoid taking out the garbage at night and talking to strangers because a thieve can burglary you.
As a conclusion with all this crimes can be prevent.
Thank you!
Agustin Fila
Monday, October 19, 2015
Oh Romeo! oh Romeo!
In the class of language we were ask to write a essay of a play that the school create that was named Oh Romeo! oh Romeo!, this play won the first price by the people that saw it, here I left my essay:
In this work we were ask to answer some questions
-What´s your opinion about thye play?
-why did/didn´t you like it?
-What did the script writers take into account when they wrote the script?
-Why do you think it meant a lot of work to put on this play?
-What aspects do you think were taken into account?
-Why was the play succesful?
-Write the essay covering the above points (150)words
Use:
-In my opinion,
-Personally, I believe/guess
-From the(artistic)-point of view
-I don´t agree
-I´m against
-15 connectors
In my opinion, it is a notably play due to the effort that the writers of the play mode to create the mixed of many plays by Shakespeare like Romeo and Juliet, Macbeth, etc.Aditionally the actors played their roles very well and they were in the shoes of the characters. On the other hand Ilike the play because of the pronunciation and the actors talent.
I could find that from the artistic point of view they know what they had to make so they gave us a good play, and the writters also added some parts of the script from the Shakespearean plays that are famous like "to be, or not to be" they use the words in the same way as the real plays.
I agree with the play, although I disagree in some parts, first I don´t agree with two parts where the same actors appear, first as a man that fight with Capulet and consequently it appear as another man that was in another place, eventhough he acted very well.
Personally, I believe that this play was successful because the work that was taken to create this play was excellent, above all I´m against the people that believe that this was a boring play similarly the others plays that were taken into competition, we can say that Romeo in some parts were very funny, when I watched I realise that it was one of the best plays I have watched.
In this work we were ask to answer some questions
-What´s your opinion about thye play?
-why did/didn´t you like it?
-What did the script writers take into account when they wrote the script?
-Why do you think it meant a lot of work to put on this play?
-What aspects do you think were taken into account?
-Why was the play succesful?
-Write the essay covering the above points (150)words
Use:
-In my opinion,
-Personally, I believe/guess
-From the(artistic)-point of view
-I don´t agree
-I´m against
-15 connectors
In my opinion, it is a notably play due to the effort that the writers of the play mode to create the mixed of many plays by Shakespeare like Romeo and Juliet, Macbeth, etc.Aditionally the actors played their roles very well and they were in the shoes of the characters. On the other hand Ilike the play because of the pronunciation and the actors talent.
I could find that from the artistic point of view they know what they had to make so they gave us a good play, and the writters also added some parts of the script from the Shakespearean plays that are famous like "to be, or not to be" they use the words in the same way as the real plays.
I agree with the play, although I disagree in some parts, first I don´t agree with two parts where the same actors appear, first as a man that fight with Capulet and consequently it appear as another man that was in another place, eventhough he acted very well.
Personally, I believe that this play was successful because the work that was taken to create this play was excellent, above all I´m against the people that believe that this was a boring play similarly the others plays that were taken into competition, we can say that Romeo in some parts were very funny, when I watched I realise that it was one of the best plays I have watched.
Friday, June 19, 2015
Graphic novels
In the language class, we were asked to create a graphic novel of a fable with a moral. To create it we use Pixton, I did it with Agus Fila.
Monday, June 1, 2015
Informal-email writting
In class we where asked to write a informal-email about a email that a boy called Tom White, and we have it to follow some steps that were given in the book "close-up B2", in the page 15, this work I made it with Pedro Amado, here is the Informal -email.
From: Paul
Sent: 10 june
Subject: Blog
Hi!
I´m okay Tom but Iwanted to tell you that this city is very different, is like canada a boring place.
Yes I can tell you to talks with the girls about the new films of vampire that will something interested to the girl and to the boy the only think that you will have to writew in your blog is about Rugby because this sport is a nice game and you can plkay it with friends like football
Yes! I can help but with a condition that you will write all the things and I make it better, and you will have to create two accounts to public more thinks
yes, you have to go to the supermarket that were near my oldest house, in that place they had all the things of the world, when I need something I went to that place and I get it
Hope to hear from you soon,
Paul
From: Paul
Sent: 10 june
Subject: Blog
Hi!
I´m okay Tom but Iwanted to tell you that this city is very different, is like canada a boring place.
Yes I can tell you to talks with the girls about the new films of vampire that will something interested to the girl and to the boy the only think that you will have to writew in your blog is about Rugby because this sport is a nice game and you can plkay it with friends like football
Yes! I can help but with a condition that you will write all the things and I make it better, and you will have to create two accounts to public more thinks
yes, you have to go to the supermarket that were near my oldest house, in that place they had all the things of the world, when I need something I went to that place and I get it
Hope to hear from you soon,
Paul
Wales times
In class we where asked to wrote a summary of a article that whe wanted, I chosed Wales times, and then to write a summary, here is my summary:
Wales coach Warren Gatland have feith to win the 2015 world cup. They opening the six nations with a loss against England, Wales won their remaining four games of the six nations. Wales beat Italy 61-20 in their six nations finale, They finished third because of points differences because Ireland won 40-10 over Scotland and they become the new six nations champion.
Wales coach Warren Gatland have feith to win the 2015 world cup. They opening the six nations with a loss against England, Wales won their remaining four games of the six nations. Wales beat Italy 61-20 in their six nations finale, They finished third because of points differences because Ireland won 40-10 over Scotland and they become the new six nations champion.
The six teams of the six nations
Wales against Italy
Ireland champions of the six nations
Writting theory of Informal-email
In class we where asked to write the theory of the Informal-email here is my popplet about it:
Friday, May 29, 2015
Learning a foreign language
In the class of language we were asing to create an article about learning a foreing language. First we make a brainstorming abot the advantages of learning it. I mark the connectors with blue ; here is my article:
Do you know a foreing language? It is worth to study any oreing language?
One advantage is that you can sit for international exams, due to these exams, you can have a better CV. In addition you can understand movies, songs, books, etc.
Althoug you have to study a lot it can give you a lot of advantefes, such as communication, make friends and eventualy you can find your way around other countries.
As a result is good to learn a foreing language because you can have better job opportunities and you can go to study to other country.
Do you know a foreing language? It is worth to study any oreing language?
One advantage is that you can sit for international exams, due to these exams, you can have a better CV. In addition you can understand movies, songs, books, etc.
Althoug you have to study a lot it can give you a lot of advantefes, such as communication, make friends and eventualy you can find your way around other countries.
As a result is good to learn a foreing language because you can have better job opportunities and you can go to study to other country.
Article
In class we were asked to write the theory of an Article. We took the information about the theory from a book called Close-Up B2, and we had to make a chart. And here are the things that you should include to write an Article. I do it with Agustin Fila, Felipe Rolon and Pedro Amado.
Story writing
In the language class we were asked to write a story and to use and underline:
-Five connectors
-Three sequence markers
-Two examples of direct speech
We were given a prompt sentence that was "Mark couldn`t believe his good luck".
Mark couldn´t believe his good luck of these years since Mark is a goal-keeper and his team isn´t very good. However he is a excellent goal-keeper. Addtionally, we can say that he caught six penalties, which is amazing for a player of this level. Above all, comparing him with last year he is making a fantastic tournament
We are here in Mark Antone's playing profesionally, he is debuting in Brown de Adrogué. The match finished with a won over Temperley for 3-1, but the coach is going to tell somethimg to Mark:
" Mark I want to tell you something you are the best goal-keeper I ever know, first you catch a penalty, second you catch a ball that was going to the angle, and third you are fantastic."
"Thanks coach" Mark answered
When he finished he went to the car with his mom and he said to his mom:
"All the things in the world I made were thanks to you, you are my person to follow." Mark said crying.
Subsequently his mom started to cry. After that they went home.
-Five connectors
-Three sequence markers
-Two examples of direct speech
We were given a prompt sentence that was "Mark couldn`t believe his good luck".
Mark couldn´t believe his good luck of these years since Mark is a goal-keeper and his team isn´t very good. However he is a excellent goal-keeper. Addtionally, we can say that he caught six penalties, which is amazing for a player of this level. Above all, comparing him with last year he is making a fantastic tournament
We are here in Mark Antone's playing profesionally, he is debuting in Brown de Adrogué. The match finished with a won over Temperley for 3-1, but the coach is going to tell somethimg to Mark:
" Mark I want to tell you something you are the best goal-keeper I ever know, first you catch a penalty, second you catch a ball that was going to the angle, and third you are fantastic."
"Thanks coach" Mark answered
When he finished he went to the car with his mom and he said to his mom:
"All the things in the world I made were thanks to you, you are my person to follow." Mark said crying.
Subsequently his mom started to cry. After that they went home.
Catching the ball
Catching the penalty
Friday, May 22, 2015
Story theory
In the class of language, we were asing to create a popplet about the Story Theory. We decided to do it in a popplet, I do it with Agustin Fila.
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