Friday, October 23, 2015

Dear editor

Andrea, the best language teacher, asked us to write a formal letter. For this assigment, she gave us some instructions:

  • Start the letter "Dear editor"
  • Follow the plan on page 93
  • Use "Useful expressions"
  • Introducty comments: 1
  • Agreeing: 3
  • Explaning your views: 2
  • Claryfing: 2
  • 150 words
Dear editor, 
I read your article about the crimes, I fully agree with advising people to protect their homes ans posessions, that is to say, prevent crime.
I am in agreement with the idea of instalating cameras on the streets, because of this, the police will be able to catch a lot of thieves and burglaries. Also, they can respond to crime quickly if not therefore sometimes they arrive when thieves have already left. Police can also patrol the streets, in other words, make thieves go out of the streets.
The role of citizens is to install alarms or sensors in the neighbourhood houses, so if something happen in one house, neighbours will know and advice police that is to organzie in groups of neighbours. I fully support avoid taking out the garbage at night and talking to strangers because a thieve can burglary you.
As a conclusion with all this crimes can be prevent.
Thank you!
Agustin Fila

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