Mark couldn´t believe his good luck

we were asked to write a short story with some things given by the teacher:

prompt sentence: "Mark couldn´t believe his good luck."

use:

A)Five connectors
B)Three sequence markers (first, then, ...)
C)Two examples of direct speech


Mark couldn´t believe his good luck of this year because Mark now is a goal-keeper and his team   isn´t very good however he is a excellent goal-keeper, additionally we can say that he catch 6 penalties that is amazing for a player of this level above all comparing him with the last year he is making a fantastic tournament.

we are here in the first match of Mark Antone profesionally, he is debuting in Brown De Adrogue. The match finish with a won over Temperley for 3-1, but the coach is going to tell something to Mark:

"Mark I want to tell you something you are the best goal-keeper I ever know, first you catch a penaltie, second you catch a ball that was going to the angle, and third you are fantastic."

"Thanks coach." Mark answer

When he finish he went to the car with his mother and he say to his mom:

"All the things in the world I made were thanks you, you are my  person to follow" Mark say crying

Subsequently his mom started to cry.