Friday, May 29, 2015

Story writing

In the language class we were asked to write a story and to use and underline:
-Five connectors
-Three sequence markers
-Two examples of direct speech
We were given a prompt sentence that was "Mark couldn`t believe his good luck".

Mark couldn´t believe his good luck of these years since Mark is a goal-keeper and his team isn´t very good. However he is a excellent goal-keeper. Addtionally, we can say that he caught six penalties, which is amazing for a player of this level. Above all, comparing him with last year he is making a fantastic tournament 

We are here in Mark Antone's playing profesionally, he is debuting in Brown de Adrogué. The match finished with a won over Temperley for 3-1, but the coach is going to tell somethimg to Mark:

" Mark I want to tell you something you are the best goal-keeper I ever know, first you catch a penalty, second you catch a ball that was going to the angle, and third you are fantastic."

"Thanks coach" Mark answered

When he finished he went to the car with his mom and he said to his mom:

"All the things in the world I made were thanks to you, you are my person to follow." Mark said crying.

Subsequently his mom started to cry. After that they went home.


Catching the ball



Catching the penalty





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