Mark couldn´t believe his good luck

we were asked to write a short story with some things given by the teacher:

prompt sentence: "Mark couldn´t believe his good luck."

use:

A)Five connectors
B)Three sequence markers (first, then, ...)
C)Two examples of direct speech


Mark couldn´t believe his good luck of this year because Mark now is a goal-keeper and his team   isn´t very good however he is a excellent goal-keeper, additionally we can say that he catch 6 penalties that is amazing for a player of this level above all comparing him with the last year he is making a fantastic tournament.

we are here in the first match of Mark Antone profesionally, he is debuting in Brown De Adrogue. The match finish with a won over Temperley for 3-1, but the coach is going to tell something to Mark:

"Mark I want to tell you something you are the best goal-keeper I ever know, first you catch a penaltie, second you catch a ball that was going to the angle, and third you are fantastic."

"Thanks coach." Mark answer

When he finish he went to the car with his mother and he say to his mom:

"All the things in the world I made were thanks you, you are my  person to follow" Mark say crying

Subsequently his mom started to cry.

Proceso creativo 2015

La profesora de plastica nos pidio que juntemos todos los trabajos y hagamos una presentación, acá abajo dejo mi presentación:

Dear editor

Andrea, the best language teacher, asked us to write a formal letter. For this assigment, she gave us some instructions:

• Start the letter "Dear editor"
• Follow the plan on page 93
• Use "Useful expressions"
• Introducty comments: 1
• Agreeing: 3
• Explaning your views: 2
• Claryfing: 2
• 150 words

Dear editor, 

I read your article about the crimes, I fully agree with advising people to protect their homes ans posessions, that is to say, prevent crime.

I am in agreement with the idea of instalating cameras on the streets, because of this, the police will be able to catch a lot of thieves and burglaries. Also, they can respond to crime quickly if not therefore sometimes they arrive when thieves have already left. Police can also patrol the streets, in other words, make thieves go out of the streets.

The role of citizens is to install alarms or sensors in the neighbourhood houses, so if something happen in one house, neighbours will know and advice police that is to organzie in groups of neighbours. I fully support avoid taking out the garbage at night and talking to strangers because a thieve can burglary you.

As a conclusion with all this crimes can be prevent.

Thank you!

Agustin Fila

Oh Romeo! oh Romeo!

In the class of language we were ask to write a essay of a play that the school create that was named Oh Romeo! oh Romeo!, this play won the first price by the people that saw it, here I left my essay:

 In this work we were ask to answer some questions 
-What´s your opinion about thye play?
-why did/didn´t you like it?
-What did the script writers take into account when they wrote the script?
-Why do you think it meant a lot of work to put on this play?
-What aspects do you think were taken into account?
-Why was the play succesful?
-Write the essay covering the above points (150)words

 Use:
 -In my opinion,
-Personally, I believe/guess
-From the(artistic)-point of view
-I don´t agree
-I´m against
-15 connectors 


 In my opinion, it is a notably play due to the effort that the writers of the play mode to create the mixed of many plays by Shakespeare like Romeo and Juliet, Macbeth, etc.Aditionally the actors played their roles very well and they were in the shoes of the characters. On the other hand Ilike the play because of the pronunciation and the actors talent.

I could find that from the artistic point of view they know what they had to make so they gave us a good play, and the writters also added some parts of the script from the Shakespearean plays that are famous like "to be, or not to be" they use the words in the same way as the real plays.

I agree with the play, although I disagree in some parts, first I don´t agree with two parts where the same actors appear, first as a man that fight with  Capulet and consequently it appear as another man that was in another place, eventhough he acted very well.

Personally, I believe that this play was successful because the work that was taken to create this play was excellent, above all I´m against the people that believe that this was a boring play similarly the others plays that were taken into competition, we can say that Romeo in some parts were very funny, when I watched I realise that it was one of the best plays I have watched.

Recursos + orden

En la clase de Lengua estuvimos viendo unos recursos argumentativos para el orden, aca se los dejo mi trabajo, lo hice con Agustin Fila: