Thursday, November 6, 2014

Short story

In L/L writting we are seeing short story, and the teacher say to as that we have to create a story, the story can be write of what we want but it have to finish with this phrase:
-"That was the last time he ever saw me"

And here is my story:

                                         The bad friend and the man of words.


At school there were two boys that were bestfriends, they were called Thomas and Franklin. They always did everything together but at university Thomas went to become a book-keeper, but Franklin wanted to become a doctor. they studied in different universities. However, they were best friends. when they finished university, Franklin said to Thomas if he could be his book-keeper Thomas said, of course.
A lot of time passed. Franklin and Thomas remained beingbest friends, but one day when Thomas was watching tv, he saw the oficial money of the e.e.u.u would be 50% more expensive, so he thought that she could say to Franklin that the money would be the doublé more expensive so Franklin would pay more and that he could put the money in his account of the bank. Thomas thought this because he was losing money of the divorce with his wife.
After two days Thomas started to explain Franklin that the oficial money of the e.e.u.u would be the double more expensive. Franklin started to think that two days ago when he was watching the tv, he saw that the oficial money of the e.e.u.u would be a 50% more expensive. He talked about this with Thomas. However, Franklin paid the double. Every month Franklin paid the double because Franklin was all the day working, so he never watched the tv, but one day that he was ill, he stayed in hs house and started watching tv. In a momento it appeared that the oficial money of the e.e.u.u would be 50% less so he became happy. The next day, that he wasn´t ill, he went to pay. He entered and he said, hello Thomas, and then they started talking about the Works, Franklin didn´t lie about his work but Thomas lied about his work. When Franklin said to Thomas what he had to because he had to go to work, Thomas said the same of always 3.000 dollars, in one second Franklin jumped and said:
"Of course, but can I see the page that said all the money that I had to poay all the months."
"Sorry Frank, but I have thrown those pages all the month." Thomas answered nervously.
"Ok, no problem, so show me the one of this month."Franklin answered.
"Ok!!!!!!!!."Thomas answered with a loud voice.
When Franklin finished Reading the page he started shouting:
"The double of the money I´m paying is wrong you are cheating me, I will kill you and you know I´m
a man of words."

When Thomas got back home, he saw that there was all messy nd when he went to the kitchen he saw Franklin with a gun, Franklin shot Thomas in the head and he killed him. Then he picked up the body and when he entered to the garden of his house he made a big dig and threw the body inside the dig and when he entered the house he said:

"That was the last time he ever saw me"


 
 Franklin and Thomas when they were child.

                                 


Franklin and Thomas when they were 30 years old.


The gun that use Franklin to kill Thomas.





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